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[09:55] *** Topic is - Suburban Senshi Writer's Workshoo Day 2 -
[09:55] *** Set by Paisley Pythia Peinforte on Tue Jun 09 09:55 2015
[09:56] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> That is a good quote to start on.
[09:56] <FireFly_9> I believe that was the very first entry in 2002.
[09:56] <@The Proprietor> Paise... what's a workshoo?
[09:57] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> What will be up your arse in moment :P
[09:57] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Anyway.
[09:57] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> So today, our goals are to flesh out the five episodes of each arc.
[09:59] <@SpeedRcrX> Okay the Classic Arc
[09:59] <@SpeedRcrX> Why would my character encounter the misery of the Dark Kingodm
[10:00] <// J_Daito //> Follow a throughline. Employment counseling that's useless leading to interviews that are pointless, to the Dark Employment Agency to a dead end fast food job.
[10:01] <// J_Daito //> Gives her the sense there's got to be something out there that has it in for her.
[10:01] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Right but here's the thing.
[10:01] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> If this is so insidious why would Haruka's character even notice.
[10:02] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Or rather, how does one get hurt.
[10:02] <@SpeedRcrX> Well there's two ways ot be affected, right? A slow drain or death.
[10:03] <golD_lux> Remember we're not tryign to get morbid here
[10:03] <@SpeedRcrX> No no check it.
[10:03] <@SpeedRcrX> The Salaryman zombie concept.
[10:03] <@SpeedRcrX> When you get drained to within an inch of your life
[10:03] <@SpeedRcrX> When you're just a working drone.
[10:04] <@SpeedRcrX> Sometimes the Zombie Snaps
[10:04] <@SpeedRcrX> And comes after my char
[10:04] <FireFly_9> Start the first chapter in media res
[10:04] <FireFly_9> Otherwise it will be boring.
[10:04] <@SpeedRcrX> Ok.
[10:05] <@SpeedRcrX> So... My char is in the middle of a fight for her life and she goes into flashback mode while she's being drowned or something.
[10:05] <@SpeedRcrX> Ala James Bond
[10:06] <@SpeedRcrX> We then see her morning where she reads about Shin's discovery, goes to dead end class, gawks at Michirus' character who rebuffs her for being a poor-ass parasite on society
[10:06] <@SpeedRcrX> She decides to go get a jorb because well college will be over soon anyway
[10:06] <@SpeedRcrX> and she'sterrified of the future after
[10:06] <@SpeedRcrX> But it's the endless cycle of rejection
[10:07] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Right there should be a cameo from Hazel
[10:07] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> As the slightly ditzy genki exhange student
[10:07] <@SpeedRcrX> That my character hits on
[10:07] <Mdm_Maestro> Because she hit son everyone :P
[10:08] <@SpeedRcrX> In fact Hazel should tag along offering to help, she's found a new agency
[10:08] <@SpeedRcrX> They both go in, they both get knocked out, harley less so
[10:08] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Now wait
[10:08] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Are we doing a "Warriors of Destiny" thing
[10:08] <@SpeedRcrX> ...No
[10:08] <@SpeedRcrX> I want to make it so the idea is Anyone can be a hero
[10:09] <@SpeedRcrX> Being a hero is a function of the choices you make
[10:09] <@SpeedRcrX> Not some pre-destined thing.
[10:09] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> kk
[10:09] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> So what happens next
[10:09] <// J_Daito //> We need to keep the overall arc in mind
[10:10] <// J_Daito //> There are five chapters
[10:11] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> So, being as I want to be a writer, I've studied plot structs a bit
[10:11] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> here's a template:
[10:11] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Intro, Initiating Event, Rising Action, Climax, Falling Action, Resolution
[10:11] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Fill in the blanks.
[10:11] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> We need one for the arc itself one for each story
[10:11] <@The Intern> And one for the book itself.
[10:12] <Vermellia X. Rosso> Okay let's do the book one first!
[10:13] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> Resolution: the HOTEL is created, Hazel is revealed as the real baddie.
[10:15] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> Intro - Harley and the others come into power
[10:24] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> I think the book will take car eof itself
[10:25] <// J_Daito //> Fine for the arc then
[10:26] <golD_lux> Intro - Harley powers up
[10:27] <golD_lux> Initiating event - The DK should go after Harley
[10:28] <golD_lux> Rising Action - Harley and Co get captured
[10:29] <golD_lux> Climax / Falling - Pitched battle against Beryl
[10:29] <golD_lux> Resolution - Beryl gets wasted and Jedite joins
[10:31] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Okay we need to do some thinking
[10:32] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> before we sketch this out
[10:32] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Who all shows up in this arc.
[10:32] <golD_lux> Well how far forward are we foreshadowing
[10:33] <golD_lux> Because Verm could be in the scenes
[10:33] <golD_lux> Does Grandpa or Gems or Paise show up
[10:33] <N. Blackhand> You all need to sit down and decide your cast list
[10:34] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Anything over 7 mains is considered overload unless you're f[BLEEP]king GRRM
[10:34] <@The Intern> But remember, we're also thinking ahead to book 2
[10:35] <@SpeedRcrX> So this should be like some Negima! s[BLEEP]t
[10:37] <@SpeedRcrX> Me, Michi, Paise, Hazel, Intern, Hotaru, Cressida, Vermellia, Souichi, Jed
[10:37] <@SpeedRcrX> Gemini, X
[10:37] <@SpeedRcrX> Okay let's slowly build this
[10:38] <@SpeedRcrX> I should be in a class taught by Michi
[10:38] <@SpeedRcrX> With Paise and Hazel in an exchange students
[10:38] <@SpeedRcrX> Ina school owned by Souichi
[10:38] <@SpeedRcrX> With his daughter in the class too, she is a secret genius
[10:38] <@SpeedRcrX> or somethikng
[10:39] <@The Intern> I should be there too, non-speaking
[10:41] <@SpeedRcrX> Okay, intro would be me being miserabl;e in class, secretly lusting after Michiru, Hazel, Paisley...
[10:42] <Mdm_Maestro> ¬_¬
[10:42] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> ....
[10:42] <@SpeedRcrX> F[BLEEP]K OFF THIS IS A WORK OF FICTION
[10:42] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> ...now I feel vaguely insulted
[10:43] <@SpeedRcrX> So yeah there's me and the lusting and the female gaze, and then Michiru does one of her boring lectures at me and I decide if I want to tap that I need to get a job because I need to have a future.
[10:46] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> You are an amazing specimen of humanity.
[10:46] <@SpeedRcrX> I thank you
[10:46] <@SpeedRcrX> So
[10:49] <@SpeedRcrX> So I go to the employment counselor-- who LOL should be X being all undercover, and then get sent to a pointless interview at Mizunomics, and then to the fast food restaurant where vermellia works. Then, one of the line cooks f[BLEEP]king LOSES. THEIR. S[BLEEP]T and comes after me
[10:50] <@SpeedRcrX> Oh and Hazel is with me
[10:50] <@SpeedRcrX> And Vermellia goes to save my ass but because she looks like an eleven year old
[10:50] <Vermellia X. Rosso> I hate you
[10:50] <@SpeedRcrX> I knock her out of the way
[10:50] <@SpeedRcrX> and then when I try to knock the line cook the f[BLEEP]k out *I* get pwned with my head about to go into the deep fryer
[10:51] <@SpeedRcrX> That's when Artemis shows up
[10:51] <@SpeedRcrX> And s[BLEEP]ts out the magic
[10:51] <=^catablanca^=> ...Why do I have to s[BLEEP]t it out ><
[10:51] <@SpeedRcrX> Because this is suburban senshi and our cats s[BLEEP]t out th emagic
[10:51] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Suburban Senshi: Our Cats s[BLEEP]t out the magic.
[10:51] <@SpeedRcrX> Yes.
[10:52] <@SpeedRcrX> So Hazel is knocked out, and I power up
[10:53] <@SpeedRcrX> But it's in this retarded magical girl dress
[10:53] <@SpeedRcrX> which is totally not in line with my macho self
[10:53] <@SpeedRcrX> So at the end of the chapter I am so torn between real.ultimate.power and looking like a disney princess.
[11:05] <@SpeedRcrX> X should have sent the cat because he's one of the mystery protagonists
[11:10] <// J_Daito //> Chapter 2
[11:10] <// J_Daito //> Dually interested and infuriated by the powers that Harley possesses, I should go after her. a) to eliminate a threat but b) to see if I can co-opt this power to kill Berly
[11:46] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> More details
[11:49] <@SpeedRcrX> Well at this point I will have figurted out how to change my damn costume to something a bite more bepoke
[11:49] <@SpeedRcrX> ^bespoke
[11:49] <@SpeedRcrX> So I will fancy myself a superspy
[11:50] <// J_Daito //> Then at that point I would send a woman out to seduce you
[11:50] <@SpeedRcrX> Will it be a hot woman?
[11:50] <// J_Daito //> It will be the Zoisite.
[11:50] <@SpeedRcrX> ....
[11:51] <// J_Daito //> SHIS SURPRISE, B[BLEEP]CH
[11:51] <// J_Daito //> ^SHIA
[11:51] <@SpeedRcrX> NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
[11:51] <// J_Daito //> Then you will reject the shia surprise and there will be battle
[11:51] <golD_lux> This seems awfully thin
[11:52] <// J_Daito //> Okay
[11:52] <// J_Daito //> So she wants a new suit
[11:52] <// J_Daito //> So I will have heard her b[BLEEP]ching to the cat about this
[11:52] <// J_Daito //> and I will set up a MAGIC TAILOR SHOP
[11:52] <Dr. M. Hanyu> ...You'd have to be a retard
[11:52] <@SpeedRcrX> ....
[11:52] <Dr. M. Hanyu> never mind it's perfect
[11:53] <@SpeedRcrX> wait what
[11:53] <// J_Daito //> yes
[11:53] <// J_Daito //> so She OF COURSE goes for irt
[11:54] <@SpeedRcrX> I need a foil
[11:54] <@SpeedRcrX> Like
[11:54] <@SpeedRcrX> I have no wacky partner
[11:54] <// J_Daito //> For this adventure you have the cat, who is training you
[11:55] <// J_Daito //> And watching in dismay as you start producing spy themed magical items
[11:55] <// J_Daito //> all of which are designed to crate the maximum amount of propery damage
[11:55] <// J_Daito //> ^create
[11:55] <@SpeedRcrX> I will notlie, by boxers are getting wet
[11:55] <@SpeedRcrX> ^my
[11:55] <Vermellia X. Rosso> Eww
[11:56] <// J_Daito //> Actually BEFORE you ge tth esuit
[11:56] <// J_Daito //> You should end up in some kind of random situation
[11:56] <// J_Daito //> Where you have to transform in the dress and Chiba's character appears
[11:56] <// J_Daito //> Trying to save you
[11:57] <// J_Daito //> earning a punch in the d[BLEEP]k
[11:57] <@SpeedRcrX> DErecious
[11:57] <// J_Daito //> Indeed
[11:57] <// J_Daito //> So you are basically lighting up the neighborhood
[11:57] <// J_Daito //> In the process f[BLEEP]king up sunrise's jeep
[11:57] <// J_Daito //> As she's in town investigating something
[11:58] <// J_Daito //> But you don't meet her yes, but now she wants to arrest you
[11:58] <@SpeedRcrX> Does she have handcuffs
[11:58] <@Texas_Samurai> ...why does that matter <_<
[11:58] <// J_Daito //> yes, yes she does
[11:58] <@SpeedRcrX> kekeke
[11:58] <@SpeedRcrX> Okay so Zoi runs the tailor shop and we fight there
[11:59] <// J_Daito //> Yes. Zoi, as I will know, is also the lover of Kunzy, who is the strongest general
[11:59] <// J_Daito //> I am planning for zoi to die
[11:59] <// J_Daito //> so as to piss of kunzy
[11:59] <// J_Daito //> so he will come after you next
[11:59] <// J_Daito //> and get murdered.
[12:00] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> What about the other one... Nephrite was it
[12:02] <// J_Daito //> Hmm.
[12:02] <// J_Daito //> I will pretend to be in love with the queen
[12:03] <// J_Daito //> To make Nephrite jealous and bucking for attention
[12:03] <// J_Daito //> then when the time is right i will leave him together with her
[12:03] <// J_Daito //> to get murdered
[12:03] <golD_lux> I love how all your plots end with murder
[12:03] <// J_Daito //> Murder is the best plan, Aino the Youngest.
[12:03] <golD_lux> LOL
[12:03] <// J_Daito //> All the murders
[12:04] <// J_Daito //> But anyway
[12:05] <// J_Daito //> We should try to interject characterdevelopment because this shouldn't be a takeuchi manga chapter s[BLEEP]tshow
[12:05] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Who are we developing
[12:05] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Right now it's Harley and the cat
[12:06] <@SpeedRcrX> What if I'm with you, Paise
[12:06] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Problem
[12:06] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> I would reveal my powers at that point if you were attacked
[12:06] <// J_Daito //> Well she could get distracted by ninegate
[12:06] <// J_Daito //> Remember Ninegate is observing
[12:06] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> If I'm distracted, how can I delop
[12:06] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> ^develop
[12:07] <// J_Daito //> Well these chapters are generally half devleopment, then emergency, then resolution
[12:07] <// J_Daito //> So let's lay itout
[12:07] <// J_Daito //> Harley is doing some supoerheroing in the dress
[12:08] <// J_Daito //> She can't stand it. Mamoru's char comes to save her and gets punched out.
[12:08] <// J_Daito //> Harley decides it's time to change clothes
[12:08] <// J_Daito //> Cut to me in the DK advising the queen
[12:08] <// J_Daito //> Saying we need to go on the counterattack. I make like I want to set up th Darkl Tailor shop
[12:08] <// J_Daito //> Zoisite of course being the b[BLEEP]ch he is, snipes my idea, which i want.
[12:09] <// J_Daito //> becausei know it will hopefully lead him to his death
[12:09] <// J_Daito //> so he goes off and sets that up
[12:09] <// J_Daito //> Cut back to Harley and Paisley sitting ina tree f[BLEEP]king
[12:09] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> WHAT
[12:09] <// J_Daito //> Just seeing if you were paying attention there, peinforte
[12:09] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> GRAH
[12:09] <// J_Daito //> hah. no so cut to them walking down the street
[12:10] <// J_Daito //> She can be going on about matt shin's discovery (FORESHADOWING)
[12:10] <// J_Daito //> and it is revealed harley is putitng up with her in order to mack on hazel
[12:10] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Well gee.
[12:10] <// J_Daito //> So we get some development in there
[12:10] <// J_Daito //> Then you pass the tailor shop and artemis comes by
[12:11] <// J_Daito //> HAzel notices Harley's interest and pulls paisley away
[12:11] <// J_Daito //> Harley is distracted by crossdressing Zoi anyway
[12:11] <// J_Daito //> there's the tape measuring scene
[12:11] <// J_Daito //> the seduction
[12:12] <// J_Daito //> the SHIA SURPRISE
[12:12] <// J_Daito //> transofrmation
[12:12] <// J_Daito //> battle
[12:12] <// J_Daito //> sunrise's jeep gets f[BLEEP]ked
[12:12] <// J_Daito //> zoi dies
[12:12] <// J_Daito //> Harley learns some bulls[BLEEP]t lesson
[12:13] <// J_Daito //> cut to DK where kunzite is all head of steam and i provoke him to go out next
[12:13] <// J_Daito //> end of chapter
[12:14] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> A few things
[12:14] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> We need to keep reinforcing the notion of the misery system
[12:14] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> S[BLEEP]t that's what we should call it
[12:14] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> The Misery System.
[12:15] <// J_Daito //> Okay the message heere is people need fancy clothes to go to job interviews
[12:15] <// J_Daito //> Clothes they can't really afford.
[12:15] <// J_Daito //> So it puts them in debt and misery.
[12:15] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Works well enough
[12:15] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> 'In that case the tailor shop should be an established DK asset.
[12:15] <// J_Daito //> done
[12:16] <@SpeedRcrX> So chapter 3
[12:16] <@SpeedRcrX> What now
[12:17] <// J_Daito //> Keeping with the theme harley should apply for an entry level position at mizunomics
[12:18] <// J_Daito //> Which ofcourse is saddled with a million bulls[BLEEP]t requirements because they're only advertising the position to qualify for an H1B
[12:18] <// J_Daito //> so it's pointless
[12:18] <// J_Daito //> This should piss her off
[12:18] <// J_Daito //> leading to her going to a dark employment agency
[12:19] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Okay hang on
[12:19] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> in the show there's usually some random character who gets hurt sucking the senshi in
[12:19] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> what about here
[12:20] <// J_Daito //> Well I want to explore the theme of the world of post grad life as a labyrinth
[12:21] <// J_Daito //> all meta and hit
[12:21] <// J_Daito //> ^s[BLEEP]t
[12:21] <// J_Daito //> so... perhaps this would be a good time to bring in Hotaru's character if we're not using her int he pilot
[12:21] <@SpeedRcrX> How do I know her
[12:22] <@SpeedRcrX> and do I know her biblically
[12:22] <FireFly_9> ...REALLY?!
[12:22] <// J_Daito //> Idiot she's like 14
[12:22] <@SpeedRcrX> <_<
[12:22] <// J_Daito //> You know her because she's the daughter of the University President
[12:23] <// J_Daito //> And she's been sitting in on your art class.
[12:23] <// J_Daito //> And she's looking for work as well.
[12:23] <FireFly_9> Now why doesn't my power awaken?
[12:27] <// J_Daito //> I want to say because Souichi is siphoning it
[12:27] <// J_Daito //> You should be in a wheelchair
[12:27] <FireFly_9> ..why
[12:27] <// J_Daito //> So that when youfinally hulk up it will f[BLEEP]k up everyone.
[12:28] <FireFly_9> We'll see
[12:28] <FireFly_9> So anyway to recap
[12:29] <// J_Daito //> Harley gets rejected for a job at Mizunomics, heads to a Dark Employment Agency and meets you there
[12:29] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Is Hotaru needed
[12:29] <FireFly_9> what
[12:30] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Not an insult just asking
[12:30] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> We don't want to overload things
[12:30] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> I do most of what she does.
[12:30] <// J_Daito //> But you two chapters in a row is a bit much?
[12:30] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> ...
[12:30] <// J_Daito //> I mean froima feasbility standpoint
[12:31] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> We want the characters to develop this is not GRRM
[12:31] <// J_Daito //> Well what are YOU doing there aren't you still indepently wealthy
[12:34] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Or no wait, Artemis
[12:34] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Artemis gets developed
[12:34] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> and this is where you find out you were given powers in error
[12:34] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> That he was aiming for Minako's character
[12:34] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> you= haruka
[12:38] <@SpeedRcrX> Wow that would f[BLEEP]k me up
[12:39] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> What's the actual trap.
[12:39] <// J_Daito //> Well it would normally be a simple misery trap
[12:39] <// J_Daito //> Let's see
[12:39] <// J_Daito //> it's an employment agency
[12:40] <// J_Daito //> so they would need to do a detailed profile. Perhaps
[12:40] <// J_Daito //> _too detailed_
[12:40] <// J_Daito //> Steal some scintology s[BLEEP]t
[12:40] <// J_Daito //> Use theprofile against Harley to break her self estreem
[12:40] <// J_Daito //> And then she's sort of putty in Kunzite's hands
[12:41] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> How is this a trap
[12:41] <// J_Daito //> Send her off on dangerous jobs that are like suicide missions
[12:45] <// J_Daito //> She gets worn down and more desperate
[12:45] <// J_Daito //> Fianlly Kunzy decides to murder her in a construction accident
[12:46] <// J_Daito //> Harley finally realizes what's happening and kills him
[12:46] <// J_Daito //> Gemini sees this not understanfing and arrests her
[12:46] <// J_Daito //> Before they can have it out, I show up and catch them both, leading to episode 4
[12:48] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Okay so they're in the dark kingdom?
[12:48] <// J_Daito //> Haruka, Gemini and Artemis are caught by me, but the assf[BLEEP]ker Npehlite takes the credit
[12:49] <// J_Daito //> Which is fine because you know, murder.
[12:49] <// J_Daito //> I'm guardingthem, but I (stupidly? nope) leave the cell open
[12:49] <// J_Daito //> Because I want them free to mmurder whoever they can
[12:49] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> You really like that word today
[12:50] <// J_Daito //> Yes
[12:50] <// J_Daito //> They should escape and find out about the Misery System. OH. The cat is not with them
[12:50] <// J_Daito //> The cat is being interrogated by the queen
[12:53] <// J_Daito //> Harley should still be f[BLEEP]ked up from the profile last chapter
[12:54] <// J_Daito //> and Geminni has to show off her power to keep them alive
[12:54] <// J_Daito //> And then harley begins to learn the truth about the Misery System and why people are lving like this
[12:54] <// J_Daito //> And then she wants revenge.
[12:59] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> So if the last one was about breaking her down what is this one about
[12:59] <// J_Daito //> I would say...
[13:00] <// J_Daito //> starting to learn to use the skill she DOES have in order to prevail
[13:00] <// J_Daito //> the quirks that make her unique
[13:01] <// J_Daito //> And actually we do need Hotru for the sthird ep because we have to set up S
[13:01] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> ok
[13:01] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> question!
[13:01] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> Do I show up at all in this?
[13:01] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> <_<
[13:02] <// J_Daito //> Yes.
[13:02] <// J_Daito //> Let's say in S
[13:02] <// J_Daito //> So we;ll get back to you
[13:02] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Well if you're going to join the team jedite how sdo we manage that setup
[13:03] <// J_Daito //> I should begin to respect her ruthless ways
[13:03] <// J_Daito //> the respect of enemies of course
[13:03] <@SpeedRcrX> Then we should have an epic battle during 4 where i barely beat you
[13:03] <// J_Daito //> Hmm.
[13:04] <// J_Daito //> We'll work on tht. I need to have you in a position where I can manipulate you to murder beryl
[13:04] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Wait
[13:04] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> How Does your character feel about the misery system
[13:04] <// J_Daito //> My character just wants to murder beryl
[13:05] <// J_Daito //> but like simon I don't move unless victory is a ssured
[13:05] <// J_Daito //> My character wants power
[13:05] <// J_Daito //> But by the same token
[13:05] <// J_Daito //> Doesn't appreciate the misery system
[13:05] <// J_Daito //> Because it is better to be a powerful ruler who is badass enough to subjugate the strong
[13:06] <// J_Daito //> Not merely tend a flock of emasculated sheep
[13:06] <// J_Daito //> that's his view
[13:06] <// J_Daito //> so he would want to end it as ell
[13:06] <// J_Daito //> well
[13:07] <@SpeedRcrX> So Harley, Gems escape. Find out about the Misery System. Free the cat. Fight you. Barely squeak by to get Beryl.
[13:08] <// J_Daito //> Yes I crawl off to lick my wounds / let Npeh get murdered next chapter
[13:08] <// J_Daito //> Overarching themees should be self-confidence in one's own skillset even in the face of instituitionalized rejection
[13:08] <// J_Daito //> and persevering through it to victory.
[13:09] <golD_lux> Sweet.
[13:09] <golD_lux> Last episode of Classic
[13:09] <golD_lux> What's Beryl's counter
[13:10] <// J_Daito //> Seh should be impressed at their pluck. she realizes that she is within THIS much percent of triggering the chaos cystal
[13:10] <// J_Daito //> She just needs one more massive burst of misery
[13:13] <// J_Daito //> So number one she shows them just how bad the world is
[13:13] <// J_Daito //> tells them that they can do nothing to reverse 2000 years of societal manipulation
[13:13] <// J_Daito //> that even if they won here today the system would carry on
[13:13] <// J_Daito //> that truth depresses them
[13:18] <// J_Daito //> But still Harley powers through so she decides she needs to sacrifice someone
[13:18] <// J_Daito //> That's it...
[13:18] <// J_Daito //> she decides to sacrifice Nephrite and make him die slow
[13:18] <// J_Daito //> his misery activates the crystal and she powers up
[13:24] <@SpeedRcrX> Then Bossfight?
[13:24] <// J_Daito //> Bossfight
[13:24] <// J_Daito //> Maybe she wants to make you het b[BLEEP]ch. literally.
[13:25] <@SpeedRcrX> wait what
[13:25] <// J_Daito //> all that sexcual harassment of yours comes back to bite you in the ass
[13:25] <@SpeedRcrX> Dude not cool
[13:25] <// J_Daito //> It's perfect
[13:25] <// J_Daito //> she wants you. she wants to kill you. But as aun undead zombie sex toy you'd be perfect
[13:25] <// J_Daito //> Boss fight conitnues
[13:26] <@SpeedRcrX> dude i'm not comfdortable with this turn of events
[13:26] <// J_Daito //> So yeah you're all down and she's getting ready to ride you cowqboy style
[13:26] <@SpeedRcrX> WAIT DUDE
[13:26] <// J_Daito //> Then Chiba's character comes in and helps make a save
[13:27] <// J_Daito //> long enough for me to kill her from behind
[13:27] <// J_Daito //> or try to
[13:27] <// J_Daito //> she;s strong so
[13:27] <// J_Daito //> we all end up on the same side
[13:27] <// J_Daito //> you, sunrise, chiba, me, the cat
[13:27] <// J_Daito //> We shatter the crystal and kill her
[13:27] <@SpeedRcrX> Then what
[13:28] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Pay off the unemployment arc
[13:28] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> You all have wierd powers and can't fit into socierty
[13:28] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> not without jhiding who you are
[13:28] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> so you take over the DK HQ building
[13:28] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> and create the first magical girl spy agency
[13:28] <@SpeedRcrX> sweeeet.
[13:29] <// J_Daito //> We close the first arc with the last remnants of the chaos crystal , that is haf buried outside, being picked up by Souichi
[13:30] <// J_Daito //> or his hand
[13:30] <// J_Daito //> done.
[13:30] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Perfect. And perfect place to take first break
[13:30] *** on breka
[13:49] <Vermellia X. Rosso> So wait
[13:49] <Vermellia X. Rosso> We need Hotaru for Super S not S
[13:50] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Well prior development is good
[13:50] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Just means she can't do anything major in S
[13:50] <// J_Daito //> So S...
[13:50] <// J_Daito //> It should be the first arc done as a team
[13:51] <// J_Daito //> Me, Ten'ou, the cat and Sunrise
[13:56] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Got a godo tension introducer
[13:56] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Minako's character
[13:56] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Luna should have found her
[13:56] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> instead of artemis
[13:56] <=^catablanca^=> ....
[13:57] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> So what happens is in the very first mission ss a team---
[13:57] <@SpeedRcrX> Wait
[13:57] <@SpeedRcrX> We made the spy agency
[13:57] <@SpeedRcrX> We have a magical spy, a samurai, da dark general and a car
[13:57] <@SpeedRcrX> cat
[13:57] <@SpeedRcrX> but how will we find missions
[13:58] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Got it.
[13:58] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Gottt it.
[13:58] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> So Minako's character who is of course hot as all s[BLEEP]t
[13:58] <[gTV]C'est_la_V> Wai, wai!!! :D
[13:58] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> yes.
[13:58] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> She is an idol who has gone missing
[13:59] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Haruka, thinking with her loins, decides this is a perfect test of thr team
[13:59] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> despite a) not being the leader, b) the scenario seemingly having nothint to do with magic
[14:00] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> So they decide to go "rescue her" so harley can get laid like in the bond movies despite not knowing if Minako is bicurious
[14:00] <// J_Daito //> This sounds like her yes
[14:00] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> So
[14:00] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> They go out into the field.
[14:01] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> all this time
[14:02] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> She has been investigating shenanigans
[14:02] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> under Luna's training
[14:02] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> So the two groups meet
[14:02] <Franziska von Karma> Hold it.
[14:02] <Franziska von Karma> Before we proceed further.
[14:02] <Franziska von Karma> We should rough out the shape of this arc.
[14:03] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> All right
[14:03] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Plotwise this arc is key
[14:03] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> It cements the team
[14:03] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> It foreshadows galaxia / the eighfold empire / sets up for superS
[14:04] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Get us Tomoe as part of the team at the end
[14:36] <// J_Daito //> So Souichi this is your thing what are you doing
[14:40] <GERMATOID> ARE WE CARRYING OVER THEMES HERE
[14:41] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> If Classic was about misery of everyday life
[14:41] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> and SuperS is about the value of oneself
[14:41] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> R is about fighting fate
[14:42] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> And Stars is about straight up epic
[14:42] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> What's S
[14:42] <GERMATOID> IF YOU'RE TRYING TO ESCAPE AAN ORDINARY LIFE
[14:43] <GERMATOID> HMM
[14:43] <GERMATOID> ETHICS
[14:43] <GERMATOID> THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN CAN WE AND SHOULD WE
[14:43] <// J_Daito //> LOL like you EVER ponder that question
[14:43] <GERMATOID> EXACTLY! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHA!
[14:44] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> So hang on
[14:44] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> we should work the matt shin stuff into this
[14:45] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> because eventually he will find three things
[14:45] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> the legend of her final sacrifice (which he did)
[14:45] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> the evidence of galaxia and the human space brothers
[14:45] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> /eightfold empire
[14:45] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> and uhh
[14:45] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> what was the other?
[14:45] <@SpeedRcrX> that's fine that's enough for now
[14:46] <@SpeedRcrX> So Shin...
[14:46] <@SpeedRcrX> ooh
[14:46] <@SpeedRcrX> ooooh
[14:46] <@SpeedRcrX> Shin, Paise, Ninegate and Souichi
[14:46] <@SpeedRcrX> all on an oxfoed expedition
[14:46] <@SpeedRcrX> like the reverse exchange student thing
[14:47] <@SpeedRcrX> souichi finds a passage to the realm of the old ones
[14:47] <@SpeedRcrX> like basically
[14:47] <@SpeedRcrX> shin finds the tomb
[14:47] <@SpeedRcrX> would have found the entrance but decides to dig again in the day
[14:47] <@SpeedRcrX> souichi goes at night and finds it
[14:48] <GERMATOID> GETS LAID BY A TENTACLE NIGHT DEMONESS
[14:48] <@SpeedRcrX> ...sure
[14:48] * GERMATOID THUMBS UP
[14:48] * FireFly_9 faceplams
[14:48] <@SpeedRcrX> And thus selling his soul to the devil
[14:48] <@SpeedRcrX> we set the stage
[14:49] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Well if I'm there I should have nightmares about it
[14:49] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Actually I think for SuperS to work Hotaru shouldn't have any powers except her intelligence.
[14:49] <FireFly_9> I should gain ultimate destrucrive power at the end and have to choose
[14:49] <FireFly_9> destroy the world that has given me pain
[14:49] <FireFly_9> and myself
[14:50] <FireFly_9> or struggle through and live.
[14:50] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> kk
[14:50] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> So
[14:50] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Souichi has sex with an old one then what
[14:50] <GERMATOID> PATERNITY LAWSUITS <_<
[14:50] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Well yes but
[14:50] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> How does this impact the world
[14:51] <// J_Daito //> If a sex tape was released
[14:51] <FireFly_9> CAN WE MOVE AWAY FROM THAT PLOT POINT PLEASE
[14:51] <// J_Daito //> heheheh
[14:51] <// J_Daito //> Hmm.
[14:51] <// J_Daito //> the Old Ones would resent thr world of man.
[14:51] <// J_Daito //> Usurpers.
[15:03] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> But what do you want, what's your motivation?
[15:03] <GERMATOID> I WANT TO BE A GOD
[15:03] <golD_lux> Not humble at all~
[15:04] <GERMATOID> I WANT TO USE THE POWER OF SCIENCE TO GIVE ME CONTROL OVER LIFE AND DEATH
[15:04] <GERMATOID> AND TO GET ME HOT WOMEN WHO WANT TO DO ME
[15:04] <GERMATOID> AND TO SHAPE THE DESTINY OF THE EARTH
[15:04] <@SpeedRcrX> Are you a bond villain
[15:05] <GERMATOID> WHY CAN'T A GUY JUST NOT WANT ULTIMARE POWER THESE DAYS
[15:05] <GERMATOID> WHY DOES IT HAVE TO BE MORE COMPLICATED
[15:05] <GERMATOID> I'M SMART
[15:05] <GERMATOID> I WANT TO RULE THINGS
[15:05] <GERMATOID> THE END
[15:05] <@SpeedRcrX> LOL
[15:06] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Okay but with all that money you could rule from the shadows
[15:06] <GERMATOID> WHY
[15:06] <GERMATOID> I WANT TO BE KNOWN
[15:06] <GERMATOID> AND FEARED
[15:06] <GERMATOID> AND WORSHIPPED
[15:06] <GERMATOID> WHAT PART OF "BE A GOD" DID YOU NOT GET
[15:06] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Fair enough
[15:06] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> so
[15:07] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> how Are you going to become a god, souischi
[15:07] <GERMATOID> I WILL TAKE THE SILVER CRYSTAL FROM CHIBIUSA
[15:07] <GERMATOID> I WILL SEW IT INTO MY BRAIN
[15:07] <GERMATOID> AND BEND REALITY TO MY WHIMS
[15:08] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Where is Chibiusa from. Why does she have the crystal?
[15:08] <golD_lux> Hmm
[15:08] <golD_lux> Hmm hmm hmm
[15:08] <golD_lux> I'm coming back in time for R
[15:08] <golD_lux> Vermy already ran
[15:09] <golD_lux> what if the Leader ran too
[15:09] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> I'm the Leader?
[15:09] <golD_lux> Yeah
[15:09] <golD_lux> You fled back in time because you were not even raised right
[15:10] <golD_lux> and you were told O HAY you're the queen now because mommy and daddy are going to go live on Mimas base and f[BLEEP]k all day
[15:10] <golD_lux> And were like nope.avi and ran when Galaxia showed up
[15:11] <golD_lux> And no one blames you because damn.
[15:11] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> But she should have a guilt complex
[15:11] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> and decide that well "you know, I don't want to be the kid that ruins the world"
[15:11] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> So she resolves to train herself in the past.
[15:12] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Buit all we know of her in S is she's a girl with Gohan-like hidden power
[15:12] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Who's also horny as hell
[15:12] <@SpeedRcrX> But she's underage
[15:12] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> She's 18 and a midget.
[15:12] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> can I not be a midget.
[15:13] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Fine you're four foot nine.
[15:13] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> Yay?
[15:13] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> This will need more thinking. Second break
[15:14] *** on second break
[16:26] <GERMATOID> OKAY SO
[16:26] <GERMATOID> WHAT HAPPENS IS
[16:26] <GERMATOID> I GET LAID
[16:26] * FireFly_9 sticks her fingers in her hears
[16:26] <FireFly_9> ♫ la la la la laaa ♫
[16:27] <GERMATOID> AND THEN THE DEMON WOMAN GOES BACK INTO THE SPACE
[16:27] <GERMATOID> LEAVING ME ALL ALONE
[16:27] <GERMATOID> AFTER THAT
[16:27] <GERMATOID> NORMAL EARTH WOMEN WILL NOT SATISFY
[16:27] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> ...lol
[16:27] <GERMATOID> SO I NEED TO GET HER BAKC
[16:28] <GERMATOID> AND PLUS YOU KNOW, THE WHOLE GOD THING
[16:28] <@SpeedRcrX> So you're endangering THE WHOLE world to get laid
[16:28] <GERMATOID> YES
[16:28] <@SpeedRcrX> ....aceeptable
[16:28] * golD_lux stifles her laughter
[16:29] <golD_lux> Okay lol so how do we handle this
[16:30] <GERMATOID> WE SHOULD TOTALLY END IT WITH ME GETTING LAID BY HER AGAIN AND REALIZING IT WAS ALL BEER GOGGLE NOSTLAIGIA GLASSES AND SHE WAS REALLY A COLD FISH (BECAUSE SHE WAS PART FISH) AND SO I DECIDE I WAS BETTER OFF WORKING WITH YOU BECAUSE GEMINI IS HOT
[16:30] <@Texas_Samurai> Wait...w hut
[16:30] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> snrr
[16:30] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Okay so
[16:31] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> five episodes
[16:31] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Tomoe's Quest to get laid that could destroy the world! go!
[17:05] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> guys?
[17:05] <@SpeedRcrX> sorry watching bikinis on tumblr
[17:05] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Can we focus we can't keep stealing the room.
[17:06] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> This is probably our last day
[17:06] <@Texas_Samurai> How do ya find out about Chibiusa?
[17:07] <GERMATOID> YEAH WHAT ARE YOU DOING IN THE PAST
[17:07] <GERMATOID> HOW ARE YOU TRAINING TO BE A WARRIOR
[17:07] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> I'm looking for heroes
[17:07] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> Wait but I wouldn't know you guys exist
[17:07] <golD_lux> Why not you're from the future
[17:07] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> But I'm insulated
[17:08] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> I only know how ot f[BLEEP]k the stable boy
[17:08] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> lol
[17:08] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> I should come back with Elios
[17:08] <@SpeedRcrX> Oh jesus
[17:08] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> So like we come back in time
[17:08] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> To find a magical cat
[17:08] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> Who can train me
[17:09] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> to be the ultimatre fighter of the universe
[17:09] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> But then I get distracted by tumblr
[17:09] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> ....
[17:09] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> So we're living in a trailer park
[17:09] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> gaming andf blogging and f[BLEEP]king
[17:10] <@SpeedRcrX> Oh man if it wasn't for the trailer park part that's sort of my ideal lifestyle choice
[17:10] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> hmmm hmm
[17:10] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> papa's charactger should be like my great ancestor
[17:10] <@SpeedRcrX> ..wait
[17:10] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> and he's hot
[17:10] <@SpeedRcrX> oh god no dodn't do thsi
[17:11] <@SpeedRcrX> stay witht the horse
[17:11] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> Well he's not a horse in this one silly
[17:11] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> except he's as well hung
[17:11] <@SpeedRcrX> OH GAWD THE IMAGES
[17:11] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> hold up wait ugh okay
[17:12] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> how does the twain meet
[17:12] <GERMATOID> WELL THE WHOLE EVENTS OF CLASSIC WOULD CLUE ME IN TO WHAT PURE CRYSTAL ENERGY IS LIKE
[17:12] <GERMATOID> SO I BUILD SOME KIND OF RADAR
[17:12] <GERMATOID> AND FIND GER
[17:13] <psYchO_saKi> Wait
[17:13] <psYchO_saKi> I still want in on this thing
[17:13] <@SpeedRcrX> too many cooks
[17:13] <psYchO_saKi> F[BLEEP]K OFF
[17:13] <psYchO_saKi> Listen
[17:13] <psYchO_saKi> you hasve five chapters to burn
[17:14] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> We're doing the future thing in R
[17:14] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> I don't want to do it in S
[17:14] <psYchO_saKi> mmmb[BLEEP]ch ><
[17:14] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> be patient
[17:14] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Let's focus
[17:14] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> So five episodes
[17:15] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> They should ideally be crazy because SuperS will be a bit dark
[17:26] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> So okay this one is about testing limits
[17:26] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Souichi is trying to be a god
[17:26] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Chibiusa is trying to be a badass
[17:26] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> They're both f[BLEEP]king things up
[17:27] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Haruka and crew are caught in the middle
[17:27] <// J_Daito //> Yes they ashould have to stop both of them
[17:29] <@Texas_Samurai> An' wait are we still doin' Minako's team
[17:30] <@SpeedRcrX> I'll do bothmembers of her team <3
[18:51] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Ehhn to many distractions for today
[18:51] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Let;s call this for now and give the roomback
[18:51] * @spiritflame has changed channel password
[18:51] * @spiritflame changes topic to `This space for rent`
[18:51] <@spiritflame> The location is: Smoke-Filled back room (X is sstealing #ss3 again today, use #ss4 plox)
[18:52] <@spiritflame> Current Location is: clear