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[11:56] *** Topic is - Suburban Senshi Writer's Meeting -
[11:56] *** Set by Paisley Pythia Peinforte on Mon Jun 08 11:56 2015
[11:57] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> So that's the only way I can set a topic, eh? Wankers.
[11:57] <@The Proprietor> Hey at least you have a back door.
[11:58] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> ...Do do you, don't drop that soap. :P
[11:58] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> ^So
[11:58] <@The Proprietor> ..._really?_
[11:58] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Yes. F[BLEEP]k off, I just woke. Is there coffee.
[11:59] <[gTV]> Coffee is here.
[11:59] <[gTV]Red_Crow> ^
[11:59] <GERMATOID> TASTY COFFEE IS HERE
[11:59] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Oh good, I like competition
[11:59] <@Texas_Samurai> So what's goin' on?
[11:59] <@The Proprietor> We need to figure out what this book is covering and how
[12:00] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Hang on, we need a bit more colour.
[12:00] <@spiritflame> Current Location is: Smoke-filled back room
[12:00] <Crwn_FruT_Gamer> I have asthma
[12:00] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Your funeral will not be well-attended
[12:01] <Crwn_FruT_Gamer> ...Not even reika?
[12:01] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Especially not reika.
[12:01] <Crwn_FruT_Gamer> T_T
[12:01] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> So here's the thing
[12:01] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> We need character and event throughlines
[12:02] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> I think we need to determine who a character is BEFORE the start of the work vs who they are in the middle and who they are in the end.
[12:02] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> And possibly where they might be going.
[12:02] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Which is where the timeline will be useful if we're really going to adapt this
[12:03] <@SpeedRcrX> Okay but who's the star
[12:03] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> F[BLEEP]k you, you won that slot.
[12:03] <@SpeedRcrX> Awesome.
[12:03] <@SpeedRcrX> And you can f[BLEEP]k me anyrime
[12:03] <Mdm_Maestro> ¬_¬
[12:04] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> I'll f[BLEEP]k you with a ball-peen hammer if you don't mind your manners.
[12:04] <// J_Daito //> Careful, for some that's a fetish.
[12:04] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Talking to me like I don't know.
[12:04] <[gTV]C'est_la_V> ANYWAY
[12:05] <@The Intern> The general idea is that the first book should stop at the creation of the HOTEL
[12:05] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Is that a logical breakpoint, however?
[12:06] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> I think the first book should break at the end of the Stars Arc or whatever that morphs into.
[12:06] <@SpeedRcrX> Suburban Senshi didn't even start till after that
[12:06] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> In this universe.
[12:07] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> In that one the question is what if the Suburban Senshi were there from the start.
[12:07] <@SpeedRcrX> Then the show would be lucky to go 13 eps because we're so damn good.
[12:07] <@SpeedRcrX> Beryl would be dead in three episodes.
[12:07] <// J_Daito //> Can't disagree.
[12:08] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> So run with that.
[12:10] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> First of all we should decide on the backstory of the universe. I think basically the only thing set in stont right now is the sacrificial wish of Usagi,
[12:12] <@The Proprietor> First of all are we representing all 5 arcs
[12:12] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> I think so
[12:12] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> We can figure out who writes what latter
[12:12] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> ^later
[12:14] <@The Proprietor> I have the timeline up
[12:15] <Sakura Xadium Aino> Let's work out the timeline without regard of if we;re going to use the data.
[12:15] <Sakura Xadium Aino> (In the book I mean)
[12:17] <golD_lux> Okay so after Usagi's sacrifice we should go right to the creation of Chaos and Light Sailor Crystals
[12:17] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Hold up
[12:17] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte>“ 99344 B.C. ??/?? Galaxy Cauldron births two abnormally powerful Sailor Crystals at the same time, something seen as a portent of disaster. One is whisked to safety on the Imperial world Selenos. The other quickly begins to corrode and seemingly fails to grow. It is returned to the Cauldron to be born again. It, however, is not re-absorbed totally. Its taint begins to infect some of the new Sailor Crystals and starseeds forming in the Cauldron. ”
[12:18] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> One is Choas right
[12:18] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> ^Chaos
[12:18] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> What's the other one?
[12:18] <@spiritflame> General light?
[12:18] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Hmm.
[12:18] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> What if we could work this into the mythos somehow as a relationship to the Ginzusishou
[12:19] <[gTV]C'est_la_V> How?
[12:19] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> What if the Ginzishou isn't merely a thought amplifyig lens
[12:19] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> I mean if that were all it was...
[12:19] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> it could be independently recreated any number of times over history, no?
[12:20] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Which it clearly hasn't
[12:20] <@The Proprietor> Go on
[12:25] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> What if, of the first two universal crystals...
[12:25] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> The Ginzuishou is a fragment of the light side.
[12:25] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> (which opens up a possiblity of a dark side one)
[12:25] * .'~SugaBB_2999~'. is now known as Tsukino Small Lady Serenity
[12:25] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> Like in R?
[12:26] <@The Proprietor> F[BLEEP]k R
[12:26] <@The Proprietor> It was an ill concieved plot
[12:26] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> :/
[12:27] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> I would say the Malefic black Crystal was a cheap imitation of the true Chaos Crystal, achieved by trying to make an echo of history
[12:27] *** BBL dammit
[13:01] <@The Proprietor> WWDC is starting; going to be distracted.
[13:04] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Stop getting ditracted.
[13:05] <@The Proprietor> Well it's establisshed Selenos took the light crystal.
[13:05] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Amend that to a fragment thereof.
[13:07] <golD_lux> Also hold up
[13:07] <golD_lux> Why would someone do that? How would they even know to?
[13:08] <John Constantine> [TARDIS Movie Theatre] Space Monks with Prophecies.
[13:08] * John Constantine has moved back to the lobby
[13:09] <John Constantine> MAybe Space Monks whose Priestess channels the spirit of Space USagi
[13:09] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Okay so that's that then
[13:09] <[gTV]Red_Crow> Are the first sailor wars part of this?
[13:11] <golD_lux> Well I think that maybe the crystals thing should be more sinister
[13:12] <golD_lux> The Chaos Crystal was the one they wanted to make Chaos soldiers
[13:12] <golD_lux> And the Ginzishou thing was made as a counter to this dark power
[13:15] <// J_Daito //> There should be a lightweilder who uses the crystal and who gets betrayed by her inner sanctum and it makes her progressively more emo until she falls to the Dak side
[13:15] <// J_Daito //> Like if the sEnshi decided to go all Night of the long knives on Usagi
[13:16] <Sakura Xadium Aino> We doing Chibi=Chibi?
[13:16] <// J_Daito //> No.
[13:17] <// J_Daito //> Either Force Ghost or the universe speaking to the prophet
[13:17] <@The Proprietor> So how does that chapter of humaniy close?
[13:18] <[gTV]Red_Crow> F[BLEEP]ked up by Galaxia's advance, the last fragment of the pure crystal is made into a lens, and they head for the Terran System
[13:18] <[gTV]Red_Crow> Galaxia herself gets ... OOH OOH
[13:18] <[gTV]Red_Crow> No wait
[13:18] <[gTV]Red_Crow> Hmm hmm
[13:19] <[gTV]Red_Crow> Lock her ass in a planet
[13:19] <[gTV]Red_Crow> One of those orbital intersectors
[13:19] <[gTV]Red_Crow> That passes by every few million years
[13:19] <golD_lux> No hang on
[13:19] <golD_lux> The Solar System does have an orbit
[13:19] <golD_lux> Relatively speaking
[13:20] <golD_lux> If she was sealed billionsof light years away but the alignment comes back into effect she could be awakened
[13:25] <@The Proprietor> So what are doing here, is Galaxia's revival an endpoint?
[13:25] <// J_Daito //> Well let's be smart about this
[13:26] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> Are we not doing Ar at all
[13:26] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> R
[13:26] <golD_lux> We could do a version of R
[13:26] <golD_lux> Like a Post-Galaxia dystopia
[13:27] <golD_lux> that we have to stop
[13:27] <@SpeedRcrX> Why f[BLEEP]k with the time travel though
[13:27] <// J_Daito //> Listen
[13:27] <// J_Daito //> Listen
[13:27] <// J_Daito //> There should be a common ambition
[13:28] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> There alkwqys is, which is get the Ginzuishou which is lame
[13:28] <// J_Daito //> MacGuffins are time honored
[13:28] <@The Intern> Well what if it's all an arc.
[13:29] <@The Intern> If all the machinations of Beryl, The Aliens, Wiseman, Tomoe, Nehelenia were all oter manipultions to try and bring Galaxia back
[13:29] <@The Intern> ^outer
[13:29] <@The Intern> by an unknown party
[13:29] <@The Intern> They are not even aware they're part of a larger calculus.
[13:30] <GERMATOID> OR THEY KNOW AND THEY'RE TRYING TO JUMP THAT GUN
[13:30] <GERMATOID> TO BRING HER BACK TO USE OF RHTEMSELVES
[13:31] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> All right so what's the Throughline here
[13:32] <// J_Daito //> I would move the Dark Kingdom up several thousand years.
[13:32] <// J_Daito //> The "Dark Ages"
[13:32] <// J_Daito //> Mediaeval times.
[13:32] <// J_Daito //> We could take various historical ruins, pillages and dark periods as a result of them
[13:33] <// J_Daito //> Led by an Immortal Queen ensconced in the no man-land between Europe and Asia
[13:33] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> So Dark Kingdom as a process?
[13:33] <// J_Daito //> Yes.
[13:34] <// J_Daito //> Part of a historical conspiracy.
[13:34] <// J_Daito //> No reincarnation bulls[BLEEP]t
[13:34] <// J_Daito //> But with extreemly-long-lived membership.
[13:35] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Do they know of Galaxia?
[13:35] <// J_Daito //> Mmm.
[13:35] <// J_Daito //> The thing is it should work klike this
[13:36] <// J_Daito //> The Chaos Strone?
[13:36] <// J_Daito //> Shouldn't be a singular artifact. It should be like Gargamel with smurfs.
[13:36] <// J_Daito //> You need a critical mass of sacrifices from which their chaos can be extracted and accreted.
[13:37] <// J_Daito //> to reconstittute enough of a seed to grow the crystal.
[13:37] <// J_Daito //> So all the wars and bloodhsed? The Military - Industral Complex? Human Sacrifices on a grand scale
[13:37] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> FMA did that
[13:37] <// J_Daito //> Ywah no see that was a one time thing
[13:38] <// J_Daito //> in this scenario every war actively adds to this
[13:38] <// J_Daito //> which is where the whole English - French thing is hilarious manipulated.
[13:38] <golD_lux> Problem: Let's say the DK is defeated
[13:38] <golD_lux> Wouldn't that imply world peace?
[13:38] <// J_Daito //> Cultural Inertia
[13:39] <// J_Daito //> Man is more than happy to keep killing himself for no reason
[13:39] <// J_Daito //> So it's a tragedy. It would take millennia tro undo the damage
[13:39] <// J_Daito //> So by the time your time was reached man might finally be all star trek
[13:39] <// J_Daito //> because without the stimulus people slowly come to their senses
[13:41] <// J_Daito //> Obviously I'm slowly plotting to Kill Beryl all the time
[13:42] <// J_Daito //> But I got f[BLEEP]ked up because she gained immortality just before I could so I've eebn waiting and stweing
[13:42] <@Texas_Samurai> But whut's the Dark Kingdom doin' in th' present day?
[13:42] <// J_Daito //> Hmm.
[13:43] <// J_Daito //> See the problem is goading mankind to war is heinous but it doesn't really lead to magical girl action
[13:43] <// J_Daito //> Why would the senshi get involkved?
[13:43] <// J_Daito //> Because if I were running things it would all be several layers above the overt.
[13:43] <// J_Daito //> You wouldn't even f[BLEEP]king know I was there.
[13:44] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Obviously someone gets an "in"
[13:44] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> And recruits the hero
[13:44] <GERMATOID> WE SHOULD TIE IN S AND CLASSIC
[13:45] <GERMATOID> HOTARU SHOULD BE THE ONE WHO UNEARTHS THE CONSPOIRACY WHILE WORKING ON MY POROJECT
[13:45] <GERMATOID> PROJECT
[13:45] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Does hotsru "Awaken" Haruka
[13:45] <FireFly_9> WHY THE AIR QUOTES
[13:45] <@SpeedRcrX> <_<
[13:45] <FireFly_9> WHY THE SHIFTY LOOKS
[13:45] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> kekek
[13:46] <// J_Daito //> Hotaru wakes up the cat wakes up Haruka
[13:46] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> But no reincarnation so how does the cat wake up?
[13:46] <Sakura Xadium Aino> The cat is a talking pet from one of the twelve great human civilizations of the human diaspora
[13:47] <Sakura Xadium Aino> Which can weave in the galaxia plot
[13:47] <[gTV]Red_Crow> Earth is just part of the diaspora
[13:47] <=^catablanca^=> PET
[13:48] <Sakura Xadium Aino> Well the Pets eventually get their own planet
[13:48] <Sakura Xadium Aino> they started as pets but became their own civilzation
[13:48] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> How would Hotaru come into contact with a talking pet
[13:48] <GERMATOID> BECAUSE I CAUGHT ONE FOR DISSECTION
[13:49] <GERMATOID> WELL A FEW
[13:49] <GERMATOID> ONE GOT AWAY
[13:49] <GERMATOID> POSED AS A REGULAR HOUSEPET
[13:49] <GERMATOID> WHICH I MAY OR MAY NOT HAVE ALLOWED IN ORDER TO OBSERVE IT <_<
[13:49] <=^catablanca^=> you guys are horrible
[13:50] <// J_Daito //> but why woould the cat even have any inkling as to what's going on
[13:50] <GERMATOID> WELL IT MAY BE INVESTIGATING WHAT I'M DOING
[13:51] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> What are you doing
[13:51] <GERMATOID> I WANT TO RAISE AON OLD ONE
[13:51] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Why
[13:51] <GERMATOID> TWO REASONS - TO GET IT TO TELL ME MORE ABOUT THE PAST
[13:51] <GERMATOID> AND THEN TO DISSECT IT
[13:52] <GERMATOID> IN ORDER TO BRING ITS POWERS TO THE REALM OF MAN
[13:52] <GERMATOID> I MAY OR MAY NOT ALSO WANT TO F[BLEEP]K A DEMONESS MADE FROM ONE
[13:52] <FireFly_9> Oh COME ON
[13:52] <GERMATOID> A MAN HAS URGES
[13:52] <FireFly_9> ::shifteyes
[13:52] <FireFly_9> ¬_¬
[13:53] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Okay so attracted by Tomoe's delvings into the Old ones the talking oets come tro investigate, and one of them finds Hotaru, who is doing the conspiracy throey thing
[13:53] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> And then that leads her into a spot of bother with the Dark Kingdom
[13:54] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> and Haruka awakens and saves her
[14:00] <John Constantine> But where are the magical girls coming in
[14:01] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Hmm.
[14:01] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Failed attempts at making a Silver Crystal lead to smaller artifacts of more limited scope
[14:02] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> which can be made into transofmration items
[14:10] <@SpeedRcrX> Do the cats s[BLEEP]t them out
[14:10] <=^catablanca^=> COME ON
[14:10] <@SpeedRcrX> This is a comedy!
[14:10] <=^catablanca^=> It's a tragedy T_T
[14:10] <@Texas_Samurai> So hang on...
[14:11] <@Texas_Samurai> All this history is neat n' all but whyt's th' point
[14:11] <@Texas_Samurai> ^whut
[14:11] <@Texas_Samurai> Where's it all leadin'
[14:11] <@SpeedRcrX> The dArk Kingdom in this scenario has a lot of resources right
[14:11] <// J_Daito //> Yes
[14:11] <@SpeedRcrX> We can take over some of it
[14:12] <@SpeedRcrX> And make it like a base
[14:12] <@Texas_Samurai> But Why
[14:12] <@Texas_Samurai> After y' beat them, why d'ya move on?
[14:13] <@Texas_Samurai> Why don't y'call it a day
[14:16] <@SpeedRcrX> My char wants to be a spy
[14:16] <@SpeedRcrX> She will milk this s[BLEEP]t for all she's worth
[14:17] <@SpeedRcrX> even if there is nothing to do
[14:17] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> which could lead into her encounter
[14:18] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> How do we handle SuperS
[14:18] <@The Proprietor> Well what is SuperS in this context
[14:20] * @Texas_Samurai passes out food
[14:20] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> In the original Nehelenia was a rival queen
[14:20] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> And she wanted to get the golden crystral of earth
[14:22] <@The Intern> Hmm.
[14:22] <@The Intern> If we think ahead to the true antagonist...
[14:22] <@The Intern> which is Hazenine
[14:23] <@The Intern> one of her gambits would be to create an equal and opposite force that is ostensibly also "good".
[14:23] <@The Intern> In order to muddle issues as they both conflict
[14:23] <@The Intern> ...Evnetually they would unify
[14:24] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> 'Kay. but what are tey muddling over.
[14:24] <@The Intern> Ninegate wants to awaken Galaxia to take her crystal as a seedd for the original Crystal
[14:25] <@The Intern> Aa a means to open up the realm of the Eightfold Empire.
[14:25] <@The Intern> and to gain mastery over creation.
[14:25] <@The Proprietor> Why would she want that.
[14:26] <@The Intern> To right the wrong she feels her family suffered at the dawn of her civilzation
[14:26] <@The Intern> To set them back up amongst the gods as opposed to hiding.
[14:26] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> But how does this tie into Super S
[14:27] <John Constantine> Conquering the Spiritus Mundi
[14:27] <John Constantine> the Gestalt unconcious of mankind
[14:27] <John Constantine> The root of all ideas
[14:27] <John Constantine> You take that, you take the species
[14:27] <John Constantine> Direct manipulation on an even more insidious scale
[14:27] <John Constantine> the Dream War.
[14:35] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> There should be leveling and it should stick after leaving the realm.
[14:35] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Sort of the opposite of "aww it was all a dream"
[14:36] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> I mean it WAS but it has a payoff
[14:47] <@Texas_Samurai> So who all is in this and how
[14:53] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Well back up for a sec.
[14:53] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Let's lay out the framework for Whatr we ant to hit.
[14:53] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> ^what we want to hit
[14:59] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Dark Kingdom, S, Super S, R, Galaxia.
[15:06] <golD_lux> Locations?
[15:13] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Wait
[15:13] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> how are we ending
[15:14] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Are we making the HOTEL?
[15:14] <@The Intern> At the End.
[15:15] <golD_lux> I thought you were stopping prior
[15:16] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Hazel does her heel turn.
[15:16] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Hmm.
[15:17] <@SpeedRcrX> Does Galaxia wake up or not
[15:17] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Yes
[15:17] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> And whoops everyone
[15:17] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> And then Hazel suddenly shanks her and everyone is happy
[15:17] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Until Hazel is like hahaah b[BLEEP]ches i have the power now
[15:17] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> and then sets up on killing everyone
[15:18] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> which is where the house gets decimated and the hotel gets made
[15:18] <@The Proprietor> We shouldn't hard stop at that point
[15:18] <@The Proprietor> We should have one HOTEL like adeventure or so
[15:18] <@SpeedRcrX> No no pulla l bleach
[15:19] <@SpeedRcrX> she needs to leave JUST LIKE AIZEN did.
[15:19] <@SpeedRcrX> as in "Bye b[BLEEP]ches~"
[15:19] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Okay let's weave it backwards from there
[15:41] <@SpeedRcrX> Actually working backqards is f[BLEEP]king genius
[15:41] <@SpeedRcrX> Because it tells us what we need to get there
[15:41] <@SpeedRcrX> So... Hazel Shanked Galaxia
[15:42] <@SpeedRcrX> How did Hazel get to Galaxia
[15:42] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Well she'd be playing up the old schol tie with me and be hanging around
[15:42] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> ^school
[15:42] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> At some point her me and Matt Shin would have made it to where Galaxia is
[15:42] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> As on an expedition
[15:42] <@SpeedRcrX> Do you have powers
[15:43] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Yes.
[15:43] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> I am hiding them
[15:43] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> of course her being a time lord she hides herself from ME
[15:43] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> so I am none the wiser.
[15:45] <@Texas_Samurai> Okay so last arc first then.
[15:45] <@Texas_Samurai> Are we all with y'all?
[15:45] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> I think a majority would be.
[15:45] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> The Dream arc shoudl end with a pointer to Galaxia's existence and locale.
[15:46] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> B/c it would be embedded in the human psyche
[15:46] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> as a race memory.
[15:46] <@The Proprietor> Nicely done
[15:46] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Yeah I'd get that message, being the high level psychic
[15:46] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> So would hazel due to her spy.
[15:47] <golD_lux> You put R after SuperS
[15:47] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Right, yes.
[15:47] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> R is a time travel arc
[15:47] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Once we know Galaxia is Thing and bad news
[15:47] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> You or your mother or whoever can show up
[15:48] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> to show us the BadEnd.
[15:48] <golD_lux> Can you get a whole arc out of that
[15:48] <golD_lux> Because you can't really beat her there if she's won
[15:49] <golD_lux> And exploring a ruined future is kind of boring if you know there's nothing for it
[15:49] <@SpeedRcrX> But see I'd be all like "let's steal future tech"
[15:50] <@The Intern> Because f[BLEEP]k causality?
[15:50] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> The mouth on you XD
[15:50] <@The Intern> <_<
[15:50] <@SpeedRcrX> Dude we are Epic Next Level.
[15:50] <@SpeedRcrX> Epic Next Level does not concern itself with Rules.
[15:51] <@SpeedRcrX> Rules are for boring, reasonable people.
[15:51] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Comrpomise.
[15:51] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> A split timeline potential future
[15:51] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Where Galaxia is there and you DO beat her by being Epic Next Level.
[15:51] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> But it doesn't affect our timeline
[15:51] <Franziska von Karma> [TARDIS Movie Theatre]
[15:52] <Franziska von Karma> [TARDIS Movie Theatre] If you can beat her there what is the threat to you when you return.
[15:52] * Franziska von Karma is now known as Franziska von Karma
[15:52] <Franziska von Karma> [TARDIS Movie Theatre] It just emasculates her.
[15:52] * Franziska von Karma has moved back to the lobby
[15:52] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Well yes and no
[15:52] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> It should lead to overconfidence.
[15:53] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> By that exact thought process.
[15:53] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> "We did it before when she was at the height of her power why not doi it again"
[15:53] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> But there's the beauty of it
[15:53] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Since Hazel is going to shanek her anyway it doesn't matter
[15:54] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> And also because Hazel is spying she'll set up Galaxia to make a move which negates the way she was beat prior
[15:54] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Which can trauamatize the reader.
[15:54] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Because then you're like "f[BLEEP]k they CAN'T do it that way"
[15:56] <// J_Daito //> Selfish question
[15:57] <// J_Daito //> Why would the heroes give a s[BLEEP]t about the parallel timeline
[15:57] <// J_Daito //> Why risk everything to stop Galaxia there
[15:57] <// J_Daito //> (aside from the facile reply of 'they're heroes" because we're antiheroes.
[15:57] <golD_lux> Because I (or mom whoever) lies.
[15:58] <golD_lux> I say that it's the direct future of your timeline
[15:58] <@The Proprietor> I'd play along because I know there's a connection between us
[15:58] <@The Proprietor> Even tangentially
[16:00] <// J_Daito //> So you'd be a manipulative s[BLEEP]t
[16:00] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> All time lords are <_<
[16:00] <@The Intern> ....
[16:00] <Sakura Xadium Aino> ....
[16:00] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> DON'T PLAY DUMB
[16:01] <@The Intern> I've always tried to be straightforaerd in my dealings <_<
[16:01] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> HAH
[16:01] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> You have your plans within plans
[16:01] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Don't lie
[16:01] <@The Intern> That's not the sameas being amnipulative <_<
[16:01] <FireFly_9> Can we get back on topic
[16:02] <@The Intern> When she stops being racist :P
[16:02] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> I AM NOT RACIST :P
[16:02] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Deviousness is not a racial trait
[16:02] <@The Proprietor> you just said
[16:02] <@SpeedRcrX> GUYS
[16:02] <@SpeedRcrX> F[BLEEP]K
[16:02] <@SpeedRcrX> SETTLE
[16:02] <@SpeedRcrX> Where were we
[16:03] <@SpeedRcrX> rei.bot halp
[16:03] <@spiritflame> cressida and xadium lie to induce the others to save the alt timeline
[16:03] <@SpeedRcrX> domo
[16:03] <@SpeedRcrX> Take it from there
[16:04] <@SpeedRcrX> What happens in Galaxia land
[16:04] <Vermellia X. Rosso> I'd say we use it as a chance to really get a sense of the scope of the universe
[16:04] <Vermellia X. Rosso> Like future tech and alien civilizations
[16:05] <Vermellia X. Rosso> that's the point where we take it totally out of the like mundane setting
[16:05] <Vermellia X. Rosso> so that you get an idea of HOLY CRAP THERE'S A WHOLE UNIVERSE THERE
[16:05] <Vermellia X. Rosso> which opens the door for the HOTEL thingy to be significant
[16:06] <Vermellia X. Rosso> So like...
[16:06] <Vermellia X. Rosso> Like Galaxia should just HAVE the Earff.
[16:06] <Vermellia X. Rosso> You can't even try anything on it
[16:07] <Vermellia X. Rosso> So you need to base off of the moon or an L-5 station that was set up before her reign that she hasn't got to yet
[16:08] <golD_lux> k k k so sis what about like... the first chapter of the arc is getitng to the future earth and totally getting caught and pwned right off by the animamates
[16:08] <Vermellia X. Rosso> Right! then the second one is escaping and seeing more of the blasted world
[16:08] <Vermellia X. Rosso> And it ends with getting to the SECRET BASE OF HOPE
[16:09] <golD_lux> Which should totally eb the sateelite of love.
[16:09] <Vermellia X. Rosso> LAWL
[16:09] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> And if we're slick about it we can foreshadow the HOTEL
[16:10] <@The Proprietor> Is Hazel here?
[16:10] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> No. But
[16:10] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> But Cressida or whoever might pick up there's something odd but not get a chance to investigate.
[16:11] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Hazel needs to be an occasionally appearing annoying genki s[BLEEP]t.
[16:11] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Totally at odds to her true self
[16:11] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> So no one really thinks about her much.
[16:12] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> like...
[16:12] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Like f[BLEEP]king Osaka Naru
[16:12] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> LOL She gets herself into all manner of scrapes ON PURPOSE
[16:12] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> to level the heroes
[16:12] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> and suss out their capabilities
[16:12] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> so that she can know them well enough to MURDER them later.
[16:20] <Sakura Xadium Aino> Yup that's her all right
[16:21] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> #notangryshegotoneoveronmeinuniversitynonotatall
[16:21] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Okay so they get to tthis psace station then what
[16:22] <[gTV]Red_Crow> I'd say find the truth out about the human diaspora at this point
[16:23] <[gTV]Red_Crow> This is when you start to understand about the crystals and the brothers of man
[16:23] <[gTV]Red_Crow> And who the Animamates really are
[16:23] <[gTV]Red_Crow> Wellsome of them
[16:23] <[gTV]Red_Crow> Me and Siren for example
[16:23] <[gTV]Red_Crow> Free US. We and Cressida / Sakura whoever and you then team up to f[BLEEP]k up Galaxia
[16:24] <[gTV]Red_Crow> We then take over and establish the Sailor Sorps equiv.
[16:24] <[gTV]Red_Crow> Leaving youguys to go home.
[16:26] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> That's tidey.
[16:26] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> ^tidy
[16:26] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> S[BLEEP]t, so that's one arc actually sort of mapped out.
[16:26] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> We can go ack later and detail it
[16:27] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Okay the last two arcs are roughed out a bit
[16:27] <golD_lux> Can Vermy and I join the gang
[16:27] <golD_lux> At that point
[16:27] <Vermellia X. Rosso> You join sis
[16:28] <Vermellia X. Rosso> And I'll show up next book
[16:28] <golD_lux> LOL so the reverse of how we did it
[16:28] <golD_lux> here
[16:28] <Vermellia X. Rosso> Yeah
[16:28] <Vermellia X. Rosso> OR OR OR OR OR
[16:28] <Vermellia X. Rosso> I could ALREADY BE HERE
[16:28] <Vermellia X. Rosso> and no one realizes I'm your sister
[16:28] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> One level of complication too high
[16:29] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> what are you even doing in the past
[16:29] <Vermellia X. Rosso> Lik nothing
[16:29] <Vermellia X. Rosso> I run a stall or something
[16:29] <Vermellia X. Rosso> I have no idea about you
[16:29] <Vermellia X. Rosso> you have no idea about me
[16:29] <Vermellia X. Rosso> Uneil I see Cressie
[16:29] <Vermellia X. Rosso> and then I'm like HOLY S[BLEEP]T
[16:29] <golD_lux> LOL
[16:29] <golD_lux> You could be an escapee from the timeline
[16:30] <golD_lux> Or no no
[16:30] <golD_lux> from ANOTHER Timeline that got murdered by hazel
[16:30] <golD_lux> for foreshadowing
[16:30] <golD_lux> and then you came ot live in mine
[16:30] <golD_lux> and then Galaxia happened
[16:30] <golD_lux> and you escaped again
[16:30] <Vermellia X. Rosso> My life is hell T_T
[16:30] * golD_lux hugs her
[16:31] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> So Xadium is still an interdeimensiojnal manwhore
[16:31] <@The Proprietor> EXCUSE ME
[16:31] <@The Proprietor> IT WASN'T MY CHOICE.
[16:31] <@The Proprietor> Because alternate universes
[16:31] <@The Proprietor> ^Besides
[16:32] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Well maybe you died horribly in the others :3
[16:32] <@The Proprietor> smh
[16:32] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> hah!
[16:32] <John Constantine> So yeah
[16:32] <John Constantine> Good going there
[16:32] <John Constantine> Let's keep working backwards
[16:33] <John Constantine> SuperS
[16:33] <John Constantine> It ends with Galaxia's revelation
[16:33] <John Constantine> What kicks this off.
[16:33] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> A war for the Spiritu Mundi, you said
[16:34] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Hazel setting up an opposite team. Rival queen.
[16:34] <Roman Torchwick> BlacHaus?
[16:34] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Sorry, mate no.
[16:35] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Let's get more personal
[16:35] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Remember when Nehelenia made the senshi face their reflections
[16:35] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> What if we took that to the f[BLEEP]king extreme
[16:35] <@SpeedRcrX> How?
[16:35] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Everyone has a doppelganger, right
[16:36] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> What if this extends to the mental plane as well
[16:36] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Excopt like...
[16:36] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Okay Hareuka
[16:36] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> ^Haruka
[16:36] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> when you have the perfection field on you're all flawless right
[16:36] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> When you don't you're a very... flawed individual
[16:36] <@SpeedRcrX> F[BLEEP]K you I am happy with who I am
[16:36] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> No offense
[16:39] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> What I mean is you have flaws and foibles
[16:39] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> You like to get drunk, fight and flirt
[16:39] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> You do silly things
[16:40] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Your "perfect self" does not.
[16:40] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Wouldn't you feel inferior if you faced your perfect self
[16:41] <@SpeedRcrX> But I *am* perfect,
[16:41] <@spiritflame> and this is where the comedy comes from everyone
[16:41] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> And probably the way the enemy gets defeated <_<
[16:41] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Because the thing will be Hazel plucks these perfect heroes from the Mundi
[16:42] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> and banks on humans innate inferiority to drive them to depair
[16:42] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> But we're all comfortable in our skin
[16:42] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> so all the denigrating bulls[BLEEP]t and attempts to make us question ourselves just get answered with punches to the ead.
[16:42] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> ^head
[16:42] <golD_lux> Right but not right away
[16:43] <golD_lux> But that still doesn't seem like the best reason to go into the global overmind
[16:43] <@The Proprietor> It's a Xanatos gambit
[16:43] <@The Proprietor> There's several things she wants and needs
[16:43] <@The Proprietor> Primarily - she wants the info on Galaxia
[16:44] <@The Proprietor> Secondarily - She wouldn't mind having her enemies destroy themselves
[16:44] <@The Proprietor> Thirdly - She really wouldn't mind enslaving the minds of humanity.
[16:45] <@The Proprietor> Primary goal isn't even one our people would know to look for (though it should be signposted smehow)
[16:45] <@The Proprietor> So she just wins that one by default
[16:45] <@The Proprietor> The other two are heat and noise
[16:47] <golD_lux> Grandpa it still has to be more interesting than that
[16:47] <golD_lux> We need stakes
[16:48] <@The Proprietor> Taking over the human mind soul is snot stakes?
[16:48] <golD_lux> Too abstract.
[16:48] <golD_lux> Bring it down to a more human level.
[16:50] <golD_lux> Team members should be knocked out by this
[16:50] <golD_lux> People should be knocked out
[16:50] <John Constantine> Let's do bulls[BLEEP]t social commetary too
[16:50] <John Constantine> Link it to MMOs and social media
[16:50] <golD_lux> How?
[16:51] <John Constantine> Play / stare at it long enough and you get post hypnotic suggestions implanted
[16:51] <John Constantine> When you go to bed, your subconcious opens up
[16:51] <John Constantine> Opens you to the Overmind
[16:56] <golD_lux> I'm not feeling it.
[16:56] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> that's what she said
[16:56] <golD_lux> HEY come on
[16:57] <golD_lux> The idea of the spiritus mundi is epic and all
[16:57] <golD_lux> But what's being done with it here is weak.
[16:57] <golD_lux> Especially for someone like Hazel.
[16:58] <golD_lux> like if I could tap the whole of mankind;s collective menality...
[16:58] <golD_lux> All that knowledge and creatvity...
[16:58] <golD_lux> I just know I'd use it to do something More.
[17:01] <John Constantine> Like what
[17:01] <golD_lux> I don't know I don't have that kind of vision.
[17:02] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Well perhaps we should go ahead and [BLEEP] [BLEEP] from the [BLEEP], eh?
[17:02] <@The Intern> ..............................................
[17:02] <@The Intern> NO ONE HEARD THAT
[17:02] <Franziska von Karma> ...
[17:02] <@The Proprietor> ANYWAY
[17:02] <@The Proprietor> Fine
[17:03] <@The Proprietor> Cressida wanrs more epic
[17:03] <golD_lux> Well hey start from First principles
[17:03] <golD_lux> How does Nonegate even know about the Spiritus Mundi and how does she get in
[17:03] <golD_lux> ^Ninegate
[17:04] <GERMATOID> IT MAY NEED TO PIGGYBACK OFF THE S ARC
[17:04] <GERMATOID> THE OLD ONES HAVE A DEEP COONECTION WITH THE PSYCHE
[17:04] <GERMATOID> PERHAPS IN THE DEFEAT OF THE OLD ONES, THIS LINK IS DISCOVERED
[17:05] <golD_lux> The mind of an insane man
[17:05] <golD_lux> is the soorway
[17:05] <golD_lux> ^doorway
[17:05] <golD_lux> a man driven so by the eldritch powers of the old ones
[17:14] <@The Proprietor> Popqueiz: you have access ot the human sobconcious. What do you do?
[17:14] <@SpeedRcrX> A: Observe sex dreams
[17:14] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> ....
[17:15] <@Chateaux Concierge> Get insider info on EVERYTHING
[17:15] <@Chateaux Concierge> Stocks, scandals.
[17:15] <@Chateaux Concierge> you name it.
[17:15] <@Chateaux Concierge> you'd know everything about everyone.
[17:15] <@Chateaux Concierge> You could blackmail the planet, or become an ace stock broker
[17:15] <@Chateaux Concierge> HEY.
[17:15] <@Chateaux Concierge> What if someone has been exploiting this connection for a long time
[17:15] <@Chateaux Concierge> like the top 1% of the 1%
[17:16] <@Chateaux Concierge> It's how they rise to the top and keep themselves there
[17:16] <@Chateaux Concierge> Then they start to see heroes on the mindscape
[17:16] <@Chateaux Concierge> WAIT NO THEY SEE HAZEL
[17:17] <@Chateaux Concierge> but because she's hiding with our crew
[17:17] <@Chateaux Concierge> they assume our crew is the threat
[17:17] <@Chateaux Concierge> and it gets kicked off from there
[17:17] <golD_lux> That's a little more deviously complex and some nice foreshadowing
[17:18] <golD_lux> But it's still kinda weak. Are we just saying it's "The Man"
[17:22] <@Texas_Samurai> Let's take a break, y'all
[17:22] * @spiritflame has changed channel password
[17:22] <@spiritflame> Current Location is: Smoke filled back room (passworded, use ss4 for now gomen)
[17:40] * @Texas_Samurai passes out cheesybread
[18:03] * @The Proprietor shares dinner with gems
[18:04] * Vermellia X. Rosso noms some fish and thinks
[18:05] * @The Intern gnaws on some sslab
[18:05] <golD_lux> ...You can tolerate that?
[18:05] <@The Intern> It's not bad.
[18:05] <golD_lux> O_o
[18:05] <John Constantine> Okay SuperS is tricky
[18:06] <John Constantine> A dream universe. A war in a day.
[18:06] <Sakura Xadium Aino> Monsters from the ID.
[18:06] <Sakura Xadium Aino> Think about it.
[18:07] <Sakura Xadium Aino> Kids come up with insane ideas.
[18:07] <Sakura Xadium Aino> Imagine if every kid who invented Axe Cop just made that real.
[18:12] <golD_lux> Mmmh
[18:13] <Sakura Xadium Aino> Cressie why are your standards so high on this?
[18:13] <Sakura Xadium Aino> It's supposed to be entertainment
[18:13] <Sakura Xadium Aino> They get stuck in a dream world and then have to get out
[18:13] <golD_lux> Because Mom it should be interesting
[18:14] <golD_lux> SuperS as a season was funny but otherwise crap
[18:14] <golD_lux> does ANYONE disagree
[18:14] * Tsukino Small Lady Serenity raises hand
[18:14] <golD_lux> YOU don't count
[18:14] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> Harsh :P
[18:15] <golD_lux> Then, your highness, you prove it tome
[18:15] <golD_lux> How would you make this work
[18:15] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> Okay so like
[18:15] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> okay
[18:15] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> okay
[18:15] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> like
[18:15] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> it would be like a metaphor thing
[18:15] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> so like
[18:15] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> like
[18:15] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> metaphors, you know?>
[18:15] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> ....go on
[18:16] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> SHUT UP THINKING TAKES WORK
[18:16] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> so like
[18:16] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> it's all about change
[18:16] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> and growth
[18:16] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> and stuff
[18:16] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> the dreaming dreams of dreamers
[18:16] <golD_lux> "Stuff"
[18:16] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> LIKE
[18:16] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> okay so like one of the characters
[18:17] <@The Proprietor> Like is a simile not a metaphor
[18:17] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> WILL YOU STOP JESSU CHRIST
[18:17] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> one of the characters maybe Hotaru
[18:17] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> is all broken and such from her life as a recluse introvert
[18:17] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> plus her dad using her for experiments
[18:17] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> and having no chest
[18:18] <FireFly_9> A[BLEEP]LE
[18:18] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> so
[18:18] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> like you know, she got everyone through Clkassi and S and now she's done
[18:18] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> she's tried
[18:18] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> she's tried and broken
[18:18] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> she just wants to give up on living and life and stuff
[18:18] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> and then she gets this "chance"
[18:19] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> maybe by hazel or who knows
[18:19] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> to enter this _land of dreams+
[18:19] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> where she can be anything she wants
[18:19] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> desireable, a reknoened scholar, whatevs
[18:20] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> and the whole arc is like a reaffirmation of umm
[18:20] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> of umm embracing who you are
[18:20] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> that who you ARE for real is way more important than some idealized image
[18:20] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> that who you are FOR REAL makes your friends happy
[18:20] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> and can save thr world
[18:20] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> as opposed to who you are in fantasy
[18:20] <golD_lux> ...holy crap
[18:21] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> YOU WERE SAYING B[BLEEP]CH
[18:21] <golD_lux> Yeah you win this round no lie
[18:21] <golD_lux> so...
[18:21] <golD_lux> okay then
[18:21] <golD_lux> It's an arc exploring hotaru's character and the importance of being oneself.
[18:22] <@SpeedRcrX> In the context of epic next level awesome s[BLEEP]t
[18:22] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> We should make it so the epic next level stuff is sort of pointless compared to her just you know
[18:23] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> being alive and good
[18:23] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> and who she is
[18:23] <Tsukino Small Lady Serenity> the world needs the [emotionally] sad loner who feels worthless
[18:24] <John Constantine> All right so let's narrow it down
[18:24] <John Constantine> Does he work her way into this on her own? Does hazel give her the chance?
[18:24] <John Constantine> How does this happen?
[18:26] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Now...
[18:26] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Is her walking into this part of the evil plot or a coincidence?
[18:26] <// J_Daito //> She's already gotten the heroes in trouble in classic
[18:26] <// J_Daito //> Doing so again here would feel like Osaka Naru syndrome
[18:27] <// J_Daito //> She should make her own way in on her own.
[18:27] <// J_Daito //> No one should even know
[18:27] <// J_Daito //> it's like her nightly paradise.
[18:27] <// J_Daito //> She doesn't think it's real.
[18:27] <// J_Daito //> So she never talks about it.
[18:27] <// J_Daito //> They end up rujning into her later.
[18:27] <FireFly_9> <_<
[18:27] <FireFly_9> /em sighs
[18:27] <FireFly_9> I suppose the shoe fits.
[18:28] <FireFly_9> Go on
[18:28] <golD_lux> Well we need to know why our guys are involved.
[18:29] <@SpeedRcrX> If social media is the way in, or gaming
[18:29] <@SpeedRcrX> like computer gaming
[18:29] <@SpeedRcrX> my character could get sucked in
[18:29] <Mdm_Maestro> Your character would be mindlessly sucked in anyway, dear.
[18:29] <Mdm_Maestro> It should be nine.
[18:29] <Mdm_Maestro> ^mine
[18:30] <FireFly_9> and who would actually come to try and save you
[18:30] <Mdm_Maestro> ...
[18:30] <FireFly_9> I'm sorry was that audible <_<
[18:30] <Mdm_Maestro> - YES -
[18:30] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> lol
[18:41] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Calling a quick recess.
[18:41] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Go stretch your legs.
[18:41] * Paisley Pythia Peinforte is away
[18:42] *** back soon
[19:37] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Damn, that was good dinner.
[19:38] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> We ready
[19:38] <Vermellia X. Rosso> Yeah I had an idea
[19:38] <Vermellia X. Rosso> What if Hotaru's charactger becomes slowly more and more distant even ehough she's happy
[19:38] <Vermellia X. Rosso> and then one day they find her passed out
[19:40] <Vermellia X. Rosso> And then they realize she's given into the fantasy
[19:47] <golD_lux> Okay.
[19:47] <golD_lux> Hmmm
[19:47] <golD_lux> Tangent
[19:48] <golD_lux> Creative folks are generally also the most depressed.
[19:48] <golD_lux> Because they overthink
[19:48] <golD_lux> What if there's a relationship to this
[19:48] <golD_lux> What if that's the commonality
[19:48] <golD_lux> They become the first wave to crumble
[19:49] <golD_lux> So the stakes are.... solve this before even more people get pulled in
[19:50] <Che_Javara> Okay but what is "this"
[19:50] <Che_Javara> Why the drain?
[19:51] <Che_Javara> Information exploitation?
[19:51] <setsy_meiou> Revolution.
[19:51] <setsy_meiou> If we're really exploring the depths of human pain...
[19:52] <setsy_meiou> what is one thing those who have been marginalized and hurt want more than anything else
[19:52] <setsy_meiou> They want to overthrow the system that has cast them aside.
[19:52] <setsy_meiou> And the human psyche... the information and the genius it contains...
[19:52] <setsy_meiou> You could overthrow society.
[19:54] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> So... a well-meaning revolutionary. Are they being manipulated by ninegate or is she riding the coattails?
[19:54] <@The Intern> I would say coattails. Getting her part of the "Xanatos Gambit". Perhaps she does something to aid this revolutionary.
[19:55] <Franziska von Karma> So let
[19:56] <Franziska von Karma> Let's focus on the revolutionary.
[19:56] <Franziska von Karma> How did they get in?
[19:56] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Details for later
[19:56] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> But I think they're well-meaning and just doing the wrongest possible thing
[19:57] <John Constantine> Okay
[19:57] <John Constantine> Sow e havw the star tand the ned of the arc in a way
[19:57] <John Constantine> Let's overview this
[19:58] <John Constantine> This revolutionary is tapping the shuman psyche, at first calling out to the lonely, self-loathing, hurt people who have been marginalized... and doing... what
[19:58] <Vermellia X. Rosso> a) making them feel good about themselves. b) preparing them to be a metanl army against the 99%
[19:58] <Vermellia X. Rosso> ^mental
[19:59] <@Texas_Samurai> Whut's the' goal of th' revolution? People who been hurt generally don't like seein' other folks hurt back.
[19:59] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Well let's say it looks like an egalatarian paradise.
[19:59] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Redistribution of assets.
[19:59] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Reducing greed.
[20:00] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Each according to their needs, etc
[20:00] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> A world where hating becomes a crime
[20:00] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> where everyone is accepted no matter who they are
[20:00] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> except of course
[20:00] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> it's really tumblr
[20:00] <@The Intern> Tumblr?
[20:00] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Full of social causes
[20:00] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Full of desires for social justice
[20:01] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> and all too ready to get the pitchforks and torches out on very short notice
[20:03] <golD_lux> So Utopia
[20:03] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Right and I think that's how this will be defeated
[20:03] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> The goal will be to reshape the minds ofman
[20:03] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> but man's mind is f[BLEEP]ked up
[20:04] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> and only by showing that to the rrevolutionary can they be gotten to stop
[20:04] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> It should also be a parable about a slow slide into fascism and becoming the thing you hate.
[20:05] <John Constantine> Okay
[20:05] <John Constantine> Let's go back one arc now
[20:05] <John Constantine> S
[20:05] <John Constantine> Hoe are we doing S
[20:05] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> You calling me a hoe!
[20:05] <John Constantine> <_<
[20:05] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> heh
[20:05] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Yes b[BLEEP]ch we doin' S
[20:05] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> now then
[20:05] <GERMATOID> HOW DOES CLASSIC END
[20:09] <// J_Daito //> Beryl dies like a bitxh and i join up
[20:09] <// J_Daito //> ^b[BLEEP]ch
[20:12] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> rei,bot I need the logs
[20:13] * @spiritflame passes them over
[20:13] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> So the DK is basically driving man towards constant war
[20:13] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> to accrete more matter for the chaos stone
[20:27] <// J_Daito //> So let me field this one
[20:27] <// J_Daito //> Typically, you losers end up stumbling in just as we are on the cusp of victory
[20:27] <// J_Daito //> all it will take is one more war.
[20:28] <// J_Daito //> One more conflict with say 10,000 casualties under violent circumstances.
[20:28] <// J_Daito //> And it's my job as well as that of the other three Generals, to foment this.
[20:34] <@SpeedRcrX> Hmm.
[20:36] <@SpeedRcrX> One of the neat things about SM was it poked at normal girl problems and made them catalysts
[20:36] <golD_lux> Not Crystal
[20:36] <@SpeedRcrX> Crystal is s[BLEEP]t okay
[20:36] <@SpeedRcrX> Welll the lcassic part
[20:36] <@SpeedRcrX> ^Classic
[20:37] <@SpeedRcrX> Nevermention that before me again
[20:37] <@SpeedRcrX> the problem is that
[20:37] <@SpeedRcrX> The whole "We formetn a huuge watr to make a chaos stone"
[20:37] <@SpeedRcrX> Is it's way over the head of things
[20:37] <@SpeedRcrX> I feel like Cressida did about SuperS
[20:37] <@SpeedRcrX> without that human touch it's pointless
[20:38] <@SpeedRcrX> Like kill a million people no one gives a s[BLEEP]t
[20:38] <@SpeedRcrX> it's too high a number
[20:38] <@SpeedRcrX> the brain rebels
[20:38] <@SpeedRcrX> kill a puppy
[20:38] <@SpeedRcrX> and holy s[BLEEP]t
[20:38] <@SpeedRcrX> it's apocaplyse time
[20:38] <@SpeedRcrX> because we can all relate.
[20:38] <// J_Daito //> Dark Kingdom: killing puppies for 4000 years.
[20:39] <@SpeedRcrX> No asswipe come on
[20:39] <// J_Daito //> I'm sorry let me dial our plans down so they prey on teenage insecurities
[20:39] <@SpeedRcrX> Make it relatable is all i'm saying
[20:40] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> But if you do it there you lose the impact on the S arc
[20:40] <@The Proprietor> Ideally the opening arc should be fun and light and epic
[20:40] <Vermellia X. Rosso> So you can evangelion NUTPUNCH them in S!
[20:40] <@The Proprietor> ...No one is Evangrlion Nutpunching anyone <_<
[20:41] <Vermellia X. Rosso> suuuurre
[20:41] <Vermellia X. Rosso> suuuurre
[21:03] <// J_Daito //> So explain to me how all this will work
[21:03] <@SpeedRcrX> Use everyday s[BLEEP]t
[21:04] <// J_Daito //> To create a Chaos crystal.
[21:15] <@SpeedRcrX> TEST
[21:15] <@SpeedRcrX> F[BLEEP]K
[21:15] <@SpeedRcrX> AS I WAS SAYONG
[21:16] <@SpeedRcrX> We need or mains to be twentysomethings
[21:16] <@SpeedRcrX> hit an older demo with older issues
[21:16] <@SpeedRcrX> F[BLEEP]k the teen s[BLEEP]t
[21:16] <@SpeedRcrX> Twentysomethings coming out of school face a more terrible time
[21:16] <@SpeedRcrX> Life is no longer streuctured for them
[21:16] <@SpeedRcrX> no more comfort of going to classes or studying for tests
[21:17] <@SpeedRcrX> they're tossed out into the world, usually kicked out of the house
[21:17] <@SpeedRcrX> and told to get a job and live somehow
[21:17] <@SpeedRcrX> in the s[BLEEP]ttiest economy ever
[21:19] <@SpeedRcrX> So exploit that s[BLEEP]t.
[21:19] <// J_Daito //> Okay profiting off human misery.
[21:19] <// J_Daito //> No issue with that.
[21:20] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Well wait
[21:20] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> I can only get in this story if we;re still in university.
[21:20] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Because Hazel and I will be exchange students from Oxford.
[21:20] <@SpeedRcrX> Well I need it too because I'll be macking on Michiru's character
[21:21] <@SpeedRcrX> So make it the last year of university
[21:21] <@SpeedRcrX> _preparing_ to go out into the world
[21:21] <// J_Daito //> I never did the whole Daigakusei thing
[21:22] <// J_Daito //> So what things do graduates need
[21:22] <@SpeedRcrX> Job searches
[21:22] <@SpeedRcrX> interviews
[21:22] <@SpeedRcrX> internships
[21:22] <@SpeedRcrX> Finding housing
[21:22] <@SpeedRcrX> roomates
[21:22] <@SpeedRcrX> cheap furniturre and food
[21:30] <// J_Daito //> That's penny ante.
[21:32] <@SpeedRcrX> Well f[BLEEP]k you it's normal life
[21:32] <@SpeedRcrX> It's relatable
[21:35] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Compromise.
[21:35] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Compromise.
[21:36] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> The Dark Kingdom engineered the s[BLEEP]te economy.
[21:36] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Over generations got humanity to this desperate point.
[21:36] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> So it's not penny-ante in the longer view.
[21:37] <// J_Daito //> ... I can see why you want to be a writer.
[21:37] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Basically you're ready to reap what you've sown.
[21:37] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Which is where Haruka's character comes in
[21:39] <// J_Daito //> I'd say some the s[BLEEP]ttenou are actually going insane due to their longevity whereas my haet just keeps me focused.
[21:42] <@SpeedRcrX> What does the DK get from the weary helpless millenniasl
[21:42] <@SpeedRcrX> Okay so what's the like... tactics.
[21:46] <@SpeedRcrX> Like whar are you taking from them
[21:57] <// J_Daito //> Their hopes and rreams.
[21:57] <// J_Daito //> ^dreams
[21:57] <@SpeedRcrX> Yeah we need to quantify that.
[22:01] <Vermellia X. Rosso> I never liked the pure hearts stuff
[22:01] <Vermellia X. Rosso> That like seemed to change definitions
[22:01] <GERMATOID> IT DID
[22:01] <Vermellia X. Rosso> If you're building a chaos stone...
[22:01] <Vermellia X. Rosso> Chaos is disorder right
[22:01] <Vermellia X. Rosso> And disorder can come from not having your life in order
[22:01] <Vermellia X. Rosso> all that frustration.
[22:02] <// J_Daito //> The chaos arising from human frustration.
[22:05] <Vermellia X. Rosso> It still feels kinda... meh
[22:05] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Well Vermellia
[22:05] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> think about it
[22:05] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> All the frustration in your life
[22:05] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> all that suffering
[22:06] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Don't you sometimes think some power is getting off on your misery?
[22:06] <Vermellia X. Rosso> Not really but I guess it would make sense if you put it that way.
[22:17] * Paisley Pythia Peinforte gets a text
[22:17] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Franziska we're due for our fight
[22:18] <Franziska von Karma> Scheiße not now.
[22:18] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Tomorrow?
[22:18] <Franziska von Karma> Yes.
[22:22] <@SpeedRcrX> Okay so refining this
[22:22] <@SpeedRcrX> The dark Kingodom has known for centuries the legend of this chaos stone
[22:22] <// J_Daito //> No
[22:23] <// J_Daito //> they have a piece of the crystal
[22:23] <// J_Daito //> but they need to grow it
[22:23] <// J_Daito //> they wouldn't undertake all this on a mere legend.
[22:24] <@SpeedRcrX> So they want to grow this thing and need to it feat on the mental waves of people undergoing misery or death
[22:24] <@SpeedRcrX> ^feed
[22:24] <// J_Daito //> Yes.
[22:24] <// J_Daito //> And since it's counterproductive to kill all your cattle
[22:25] <// J_Daito //> Once they realized technology had got to the point where a f[BLEEP]kup meant they'd nuke the planet they switched from overy fomenting of large scale war
[22:25] <// J_Daito //> to ruinous military-based economies and a fear-based motivation instead
[22:26] <// J_Daito //> And then rigged the economies to create the 1% / 99% divide
[22:26] <// J_Daito //> A constant state of misery for most of the world's population
[22:26] <// J_Daito //> and social media to spread the misery
[22:26] <// J_Daito //> And the feels.
[22:28] <@SpeedRcrX> So basically my character
[22:28] <@SpeedRcrX> Is leading the most bohemian bulls[BLEEP]t life
[22:28] <@SpeedRcrX> and then okay waut
[22:28] <@SpeedRcrX> Wait
[22:28] <@SpeedRcrX> how does the space cat get into this again
[22:29] <[gTV]Red_Crow> There are two crystaks
[22:29] <[gTV]Red_Crow> One light one dark
[22:29] <[gTV]Red_Crow> Galaxia took the light one and made it dark too because she f[BLEEP]ked up
[22:29] <[gTV]Red_Crow> Some of the light one survived in chunks
[22:29] <[gTV]Red_Crow> the Space Cats have 'em
[22:30] <[gTV]Red_Crow> They are trying to repvent the dark crystal from being matured
[22:30] <[gTV]Red_Crow> because they fear sailor wars 2
[22:30] <[gTV]Red_Crow> so the DK's crystal sort of alerted them that stuff was going down
[22:30] <[gTV]Red_Crow> And they sent some ambassadors here to find TEENAGERS IWTH ATTITUDE
[22:32] <@The Intern> Cats should not be tsalking pets.
[22:32] <@The Intern> They should be gallifreyan
[22:33] <=^catablanca^=> Do gallifreyan cats talk :P
[22:33] <@The Intern> No <_<
[22:33] <=^catablanca^=> Cats should be old ones.
[22:33] <=^catablanca^=> I DARE YOU
[22:33] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Done.
[22:43] <@Texas_Samurai> How long we been at this, y'all
[22:43] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> Almost 12 hours.
[22:43] <@SpeedRcrX> Chrust
[22:43] <@SpeedRcrX> ^Christ
[22:49] <@SpeedRcrX> Oh god
[22:49] <@SpeedRcrX> can't think anymore
[22:49] <@SpeedRcrX> we may need to do this for one more day
[22:51] <[gTV]C'est_la_V> Mohhh
[22:51] <[gTV]C'est_la_V> MOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
[22:52] <@Texas_Samurai> Nice cow imitation thar, darlin'
[22:52] <[gTV]C'est_la_V> :P
[22:52] <// J_Daito //> Ladies, ladies~
[22:52] <// J_Daito //> no fighting without the jello pit.
[22:52] <@Texas_Samurai> ¬_¬
[22:52] <[gTV]C'est_la_V> ¬_¬
[22:53] <Vermellia X. Rosso> jed gonna get shaaaaaaaanked~ ♫
[22:53] <Paisley Pythia Peinforte> So what's the agenda for tomorrow?
[22:54] <FireFly_9> Flesh out the C and S arc structure
[22:54] <FireFly_9> Flesh out each of the 25 chapters in at least broad strokes
[22:54] <FireFly_9> assign characters
[22:54] <FireFly_9> And then run with it
[22:55] <@Texas_Samurai> Save this log n' reset th' room so others can use it?
[22:55] <@The Proprietor> kk
[22:56] * @The Proprietor has changed channel password
[22:57] * @The Proprietor changes topic to `Room open again; X may take it over again in the afternoon`